From Left To Right 俺歌詞，其他suno創作

From Left To Right

 

Verse 1

Me twenty, you eighteen

in a picture black n white

Me stripe polo, you plaid shirt

Our faces lit by gentle twilight

To your left my tender chest

Soaked in your warm smile

My right arm around your shoulders

and lost in your sparkling eyes

 

Verse 2

My hairs gray, yours brown

in a picture colored by time

Me black tux, you blue gown

Our wrinkles blurred by hazy light

To your right my scarred chest

Soaked in your warm smile

My left arm around your shoulders

and lost in your sparkling eyes

 

Prechorus

Black n white fade into colors

when we meet and sigh

Time flies by

and leaves one knot to tie

 

Chorus

Through bends, breaks, and mends

through each other we walk

That’s how our journey ends

How our fates cross and talk

所有跟帖： 

• 哪個版好聽？ -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 10:32:52

• See inside -nearby- ♂ (361 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 10:48:34

• 謝謝鄰兄，雖然我request soft rock， folk，看來歌詞讓suno加了jazz味 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 10:50:50

• 我自己感覺第三最好，最喜歡。不知道憂兒作何評論，她內行我外行 -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 10:55:10

• 謝謝，第3是soft rock，grok推薦的，讚 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 10:57:32

• grok其實也不錯，我用過兩次。這些AI裏麵，google的要差一點，雖然我看好google -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 11:00:22

• 覺得grok好像稍好於gpt，沒玩過Google家的 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 11:10:18

• 再點讚一次。再發個評論：寫歌詞真的與寫詩不一樣，英文的又更不一樣，佩服！ -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 10:53:45

• 謝謝謬讚，感覺需要把詩tweak一些，歌詞可能ai寫起來容易，因為模式化 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 10:58:52

• 這句Time flies by and leaves one knot to tie其實也可以作收尾的高潮句，個見哈 -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 10:58:46

• good point, 把prechorus和chorus對調 ：D -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 11:00:03

• 仿一個:從西到東 -看海闊天空- ♂ (146 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 11:20:19

• 有唱中文的嗎？比較唱功，容易些。哈！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 12:18:47

• nearby和顫音，已成了【AI知音】啦！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 12:21:33

• 這兩ID，到底是顫音還是顫音AI, 是nearly 還是nearbyAI， 沒人能夠分清楚 -看海闊天空- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 14:07:30

• 哈哈哈，我的id有快10年來，那時ai還是媽媽肚子裏 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 14:11:10

• 這個創意好 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 14:11:39

• 這麽多。。。選擇困難症犯了。~ -塵凡無憂- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 18:43:32

• Cool! -EuphoriaF- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/16/2025 postreply 10:24:00