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好玩的是這個網站是個電腦高手弄的，他弄了個給詩歌打分的，按照分數置頂，不過他也“優化”他的打分係統。最新版給的分數和老板幾乎180度轉彎。這個是近一年前寫的，那時分數很低的，新版來了，竟然置頂了。哈哈哈。

 

Many a Me

Many a Me
drowned in your eyes
roll down your face
and fall onto my palms
cold and warm
Seep through my fingers
drop by drop
vanish into the soil
© Oct '22

Likes: kevin, MissHexxx, kaye, Autumnhope2, Shidare, Ken Doll, Apollo Silvercrest, Frélancér, Denis Blazevic, Soulstice1, Jackybee, Beyonder, Cam., Busy, AbelBPoetry, Roha

 

Shidare - It sounds like the beautiful song of a teardrop.... Singing of the melancholic life of its own kind. The rythym... very soothing and easy. Beautiful precious one
6 hours ago

Busy - Fantastic poem. I can relate to it well. Keep going
8 hours ago

Busy - Interpretation first put forward by the profound german philosopher professor martin Heidegger. Or was it Nietzsche before him. I dunno! Lol
7 hours ago

Busy - But lol this is but my interpretation of the poem. Sorry if it is miles out.
7 hours ago

Busy - We all get sanded down and vanished like pieces of wood lol in Zen I think they call it the lacquer barrel but I am not sure. But I had a friend a few years ago telling me about it. You never know it may be a universal! But as a particular it related to me anyway. Great poem.
7 hours ago

 

 

所有跟帖： 

• 祝賀登頂！ -花似鹿蔥- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 08:05:27

• 祝賀攻占光明頂！讓敵人們顫抖去吧~~~ -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 08:09:01

• 顫顫自顫呢！ -花似鹿蔥- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 08:46:11

• 套用劉曉波的名言，我沒有敵人，哈哈哈 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 14:16:24

• 哈哈哈，就是好玩 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 14:15:51

• 顫音的投入很特別特色，想起張宗昌的詩 -freemanli01- ♂ (2191 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 10:51:40

• 自由人聯想豐富，哈哈哈，不過這蛤蟆詩生動上口 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 14:17:20

• 哈哈，這個其實蠻有文化， -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (1146 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 17:50:07

• 老張真是有讓人喜歡的地方，最少來說吧，人家就信老天造人，是讓人活得高興的。 -freemanli01- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 18:12:51

• 哈哈哈，妙 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 19:23:33

• 慢慢地，從一些詩歌裏，能體會一些生命的東西。詩心、天真。投入，又不是現代企業文化裏所說的發瘋般的“投入” -freemanli01- ♂ (116 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 18:06:41

• 想到什麽寫什麽就好，Dickinson 好像活著的時候寫的都是給自己看的，絕大多數都沒發表過 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 19:24:26

• 奇妙！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 12:04:28

• 謝謝喵 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 14:17:31

• 很棒。顫顫繼續Tears Down Heart Up. -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 17:37:37

• 謝謝，hearts down，too，哈哈哈 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 19:26:21

• Ups/downs/That's life, young man. 大學英文老師教的第一句詩。 -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 22:45:33

• 牛！ -西東人8- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 19:20:51

• 謝謝西東兄！ -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 19:26:52

• 熱烈祝賀。。。您在說消逝的愛情嗎？ -唐宋韻- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 20:39:00

• 謝謝，本意如此 ：-） -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 22:08:15