From left to right 喜歡花班長講的黑白照片 曾看到一張黑白照片,寫了這幾行

From left to right


Me twenty, you eighteen
in a picture black n white
Me in striped polo, you in plaid shirt
as if they perfectly unite
To your left my tender chest
leaned against by your blonde smile
My right arm wrapped around your left shoulder
pulling to me your blue eyes
Black and white fade into colors
when we meet and sigh
Time flies by
Me in black tux, you in black gown
my hairs gray, yours brown
To your right my scarred chest
leaned against by your blonde smile
My left arm wrapped around your right shoulder
pulling to me your blue eyes
Through many bends and mends
through each other we walk
and that’s how our journey ends

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你的AI密友尼? -花似鹿蔥- 給 花似鹿蔥 發送悄悄話 花似鹿蔥 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 07/14/2023 postreply 09:07:38

花版打住,顫音兄臉皮比較薄不像老鍵 -老鍵- 給 老鍵 發送悄悄話 老鍵 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 07/14/2023 postreply 11:56:47

都厚! -lovecat08- 給 lovecat08 發送悄悄話 lovecat08 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 07/14/2023 postreply 13:53:02

pulling to me your blue eyes Black and white fade into color -花似鹿蔥- 給 花似鹿蔥 發送悄悄話 花似鹿蔥 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 07/14/2023 postreply 09:13:12

我老喜歡藍色呢,各種各樣的藍,藍白眼睛成一對,絕配! -花似鹿蔥- 給 花似鹿蔥 發送悄悄話 花似鹿蔥 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 07/14/2023 postreply 09:24:40

恕我直言,black tux and black gown畫麵感有點過於單調,不合全詩色彩。不好意思暴露我的粗淺美學 -老鍵- 給 老鍵 發送悄悄話 老鍵 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 07/14/2023 postreply 12:04:54

以前,書法好像是right to left -lovecat08- 給 lovecat08 發送悄悄話 lovecat08 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 07/14/2023 postreply 13:49:36

報紙也是 -lovecat08- 給 lovecat08 發送悄悄話 lovecat08 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 07/14/2023 postreply 13:50:14

美感上 有區別嗎? -lovecat08- 給 lovecat08 發送悄悄話 lovecat08 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 07/14/2023 postreply 13:51:06

你的版主,是我叫秋蘭去邀你的。 -lovecat08- 給 lovecat08 發送悄悄話 lovecat08 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 07/14/2023 postreply 18:47:52

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