漫長的告別 因為邵君隻輕的故事想起自己曾寫過的中英文混搭的口水歌 pun？

漫長的告別 So long (漫長), So long (告別）

 

我們步履匆匆

走過盛夏寒冬

數著雨後的彩虹

青春的路無影無蹤

 

We walked many a furlong

So long

The roads that were young.

So long,

The clouds that were young.

So long,

The hearts that were young. 

 

我們敲響晨鍾

來喚醒朝陽的光榮

揮別晚霞初上的天空

相望茫茫人海中

 

We were lost in a throng

So long

The clouds that were young

So long

The hearts that were young

So long

The roads that were young

 

我們長歌相擁

直到歡心刻滿傷痛

今日的心跳沉重

昨日的詩歌誰來吟誦

 

We sang a dissonant song

So long

The hearts that were young

So long

The roads that were young

So long

The clouds that were young

所有跟帖： 

• 希望，告別越短越好。 -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 20:49:37

• 易傷感啊！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 20:50:19

• 哲理啊：-）不過都短平快，就沒有瓊瑤的小說了 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 20:51:58

• 有些人甚至不要告別，尤其是男女變心後，一個email就告別了。 -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 20:55:49

• 是呀，越來越輕了 -邵豐慧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:04:10

• 這樣不痛，或者像愛貓說的長痛不如短痛 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:05:54

• So long, but actually so short. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:01:47

• So long, farewell, Auf Wiedersehen, adieu... -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:00:22

• Adieu, adieu To you and you and you.. -shuier- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:02:33

• So long, farewell, Auf Weidersehen, goodbye -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:04:01

• I leave and heave a sigh and say goodbye... -shuier- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:05:35

• I'm glad to go... -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:07:40

• You are going nowhere... -shuier- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:09:56

• I know, I know, but it's getting late now... -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:12:46

• Oh No, Oh No...! -shuier- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:15:41

• Oh Yes, Oh Yes, So long and so long... -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:17:43

• 哈哈哈哈，聽起來，有點肉麻！（老娘敢說！誰怕誰？這類似床戲的辭！） -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/14/2023 postreply 09:35:11

• 用所有的語言告別一次，不知需要多久 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:06:57

• 期待你唱出來。 單看詞，有種鄉村音樂的感覺。 -邵豐慧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:03:47

• 謝謝，這個是玩文字遊戲，可能比較順口 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:07:44

• 上禮拜。。。。。。。。。。 -lovecat08- ♀ (260 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:10:23

• 可能不是個壞主意？ -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:24:08

• 我也是這樣子覺得，把多年愛你的女孩子，弄得眼淚嘩嘩的流，還不如。。。。 -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:28:31

• 漢子要學會對不該有的豔遇說；No！女子也要學會對買太多的shopping說；No！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:31:28

• 哈哈哈，晚安，東岸的夜貓子們 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 21:41:19

• 大家晚安！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2023 postreply 22:07:54

• 顫音的詩歌裏有一種年輕人的感傷與憂鬱，讀來有點沉重，細品卻是青春。。。 -花似鹿蔥- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2023 postreply 05:09:04

• 謝謝啊！油膩大叔偶爾酸一下 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2023 postreply 11:23:55