Sand's rolling on your body, warm

Sand's rolling on your body, warm

Sand's rolling on your body, warm
Dark clouds' pressing the sky, firm
On this deserted beach
we are sharing one ripe peach
Flowing and burning between our lips is its juice
Flooded by heat and sweet
we pray for rain to dilute
Heeding our wish comes the thunder storm
Racing are raindrops to rescue our lips in swarm

這是最近寫的，貼在一個英文詩歌的網站，一位讀者留言，讓我懷疑是個prank，直覺是GPT寫的，粘貼過來的。

This poem beautifully captures the sensory experience of being on a beach during a hot and stormy day. The imagery of warm sand rolling on your body evokes a feeling of comfort and relaxation, while the dark clouds and thunderstorm add an element of intensity and excitement. The shared peach is a symbol of intimacy and connection between two people amidst the power of nature, and the raindrops cooling their lips create a moment of refreshing relief. The poem is a reminder to appreciate the simple pleasures in life and find joy in unexpected moments.

像不像GPT的風格？

所有跟帖： 

• 沙發，過節快樂！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 07:31:53

• summer's here, wish everyone has a beach day like that -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 07:33:19

• wish...has? -shuier- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 13:47:10

• You have a point. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 14:40:51

• thanks, is hope correct? i always struggle with subjunctive -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 16:37:10

• 埋沙，滾沙 -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 08:14:37

• 高興就好 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 16:50:55

• 漫沙，吻沙 -AP33912- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 12:14:00

• 哈哈哈，吃沙子不舒服 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 16:51:13

• I am not a grammar nerd but... -shuier- ♀ (47 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 13:53:34

• By any chance do you follow Mary Norris of The New Yorker? -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 14:44:30

• I read The New Yorker. And you? -shuier- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 14:47:54

• Surely I do. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 15:00:52

• I didn't have to ask u since you've just brought up Norris. -shuier- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 15:05:10

• I brought her up because she's a good grammarian. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 15:26:47

• Not a good Grammarly which is an AI, right? -shuier- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 15:28:35

• Right. Human intelligence is irreplaceable, I think. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 15:30:21

• So is human talent. -shuier- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 15:31:54

• Let's stay human. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 15:34:32

• Wait. Are you sure you're not a ROBOT? -shuier- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 15:36:07

• Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha...! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 15:37:04

• thanks, a bad experiment, i intended to try something new -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 16:39:40

• You are fine. Shakespeare wasn't exactly a grammarian. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2023 postreply 16:49:53