【故國神遊】試譯三首最簡古詩，求教各位雙語人士

王之渙《登鸛雀樓》

白日依山盡
黃河入海流
欲窮千裏目
更上一層樓

《Ascend Guanque Tower》

Down the mountain lingers a bright sun
Into the sea winds the Yellow River's run
To exhaust a thousand-mile view
I ascended to the next level anew

孟浩然《春曉》

春眠不覺曉
處處聞啼鳥
夜來風雨聲
花落知多少

《A Spring Dawn》

A spring slumber made me sleep over the dawn
While bird chirpings were heard all around
With winds and rains clamoring all night long
I wondered how many petals were on the ground

柳宗元《江雪》

千山鳥飛絕
萬徑人蹤滅
孤舟蓑笠翁
獨釣寒江雪

《Snowy River》

Amid ten hundreds of hills, eradicated of birds in hover
And ten thousands of trails, sterile of traces of a hiker
An elder in a lone boat, in a straw cloak and a bamboo hat
Is angling in solitude, in the chill of the snowy river

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• 不通詩詞無法唱和，也借此向壇上中華詩詞愛好者致敬 -老鍵- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/11/2023 postreply 13:35:27

• I'm humbled. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/11/2023 postreply 19:10:01

• 隻點讚！不敢改！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/11/2023 postreply 13:39:46

• 留給秋蘭的壇作業！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/11/2023 postreply 13:40:21

• 我想這裏都是雙語甚至多語人士啊 -老鍵- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/11/2023 postreply 14:22:31

• You are too humble. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/11/2023 postreply 19:10:26

• 讚！ -花似鹿蔥- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/11/2023 postreply 14:18:49

• 花似鹿蔥勤點讚，為緣文字擠書壇，寒山鬥笠收江雪，渾水魚多待大餐 -一劍無痕- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/11/2023 postreply 18:54:12

• 讚！我隻有磚頭，還是留著蓋樓，等玉 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/11/2023 postreply 15:29:18

• 什麽意思？沒有磚哪有玉，我請chatGPT了隻好 -老鍵- ♂ (4403 bytes) () 06/11/2023 postreply 15:53:30

• When it comes to English, I'm a prose person. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/11/2023 postreply 18:29:51

• You've managed to catch the mood. You're a good translator. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/11/2023 postreply 19:09:27

• Try One : -AP33912- ♂ (803 bytes) () 06/11/2023 postreply 19:45:12