七絕《忘機》

平水韻上平五微

喜得秋蘭的寶貴意見。


世味終如啖野薇，平安歲月苦中祈。
無端雲影窗前過，再看原來白鶴飛。


--- 葦葦

 

 

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• 葦葦應該很年輕啊，這詩寫得曆經滄桑的感覺。。。。 -花似鹿蔥- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 16:16:55

• 謝謝蔥姐！人在天涯，多少有點感觸的吧。 -寒葦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 16:46:35

• 葦葦，一切隨緣。隻能這樣說。萬千祝福！ -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 16:50:20

• It's hard to shake it off. I'm feeling so blue. -寒葦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 18:14:37

• May I crack you up? -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 18:17:19

• It isn't easy to laugh it off, mind you. -寒葦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 18:18:33

• It isn't easy, but it isn't impossible, either. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 18:20:07

• You won't give up on me. Go ahead and give it a try. -寒葦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 18:22:48

• A starving squirrel happened to speak English... -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 18:27:14

• What's stopping you? Go on! -寒葦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 18:30:05

• It ran into me. Breathlessly it asked me... -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 18:40:53

• Don't hold up your punchline. -寒葦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 18:42:45

• Breathlessly,the starving squirrel asked me, "Are you nuts?" -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 18:45:05

• Hahahahahahaha......! -寒葦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 18:45:52

• Wei Wei is cracking up, big time. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 18:47:20

• The nutty squirrel asked you, "Are you nuts?" Are you? -寒葦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 18:49:31

• No way. And you? -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 18:50:33

• NO WAY! -寒葦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 18:52:01

• I hate to interrupt you guys. Qiulan, you're so funny! -shuier- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 18:53:51

• I take it as a compliment. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 18:54:44

• You earned it. OK, I'll let you go. -shuier- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 18:58:20

• 挺好的一首平水韻七絕。不怕用窄韻，點題而不留痕，末句餘味無窮。古典詩歌後繼有人。將來閱曆更深，詩必更耐品。 -LYJiang- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 19:17:39

• 太感謝江先生了！ -寒葦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2023 postreply 19:18:55

• 沒太看懂：） -西東人8- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/25/2023 postreply 12:54:41