bloody valentine

Stir my blood with your fingers

Stir my blood with your fingers
I implore
till it turns into dark chocolate
silky and bitter
and yearns for the warmth of your lips

 

Likes: Luvey, Fatum Ferrarius, Fair Sunshine

Fair Sunshine - Fine write Vibrato, with nice imagery too. Blessings,Gordon

Nicely done!
Feb 3   

Fatum Ferrarius - Ooh, I loved this! A very original idea and I appreciate the visual that your words create. Well done!
Feb 3   

所有跟帖： 

• This love poem is so special. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/13/2023 postreply 21:32:19

• What a romantic and sexy poem, perfect for Valentine's Day! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/13/2023 postreply 21:47:24

• 替你加一句結尾， -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (250 bytes) () 02/14/2023 postreply 00:08:13

• 這個加的好！ -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2023 postreply 09:10:09

• 主要是覺得行太少。哈哈。 -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2023 postreply 14:51:08

• 好詩，來的是時候。很顫 -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2023 postreply 04:23:18

• 先讚 -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2023 postreply 04:36:11

• 情深意濃。 -梧桐之丘- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2023 postreply 08:01:29

• 謝謝大家留言！ -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2023 postreply 09:10:43

• 搶先替大家回答你：有空~來坐坐，來唱唱，來顫顫。：） -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2023 postreply 14:52:43

• 確實很顫，溫暖的唇和絲絨巧克力很搭 -浮雲馳- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2023 postreply 14:50:53