my grandfather

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my grandfather

 
my grandfather
died of a cold rain
in the early spring of 1965, he carried
produces he grew and saved for months
and walked thirty miles of mountain roads to the train station
he was going to the city to visit his only daughter
it rained halfway
he did not have an umbrella
he did not turn back either

later
his daughter accompanied him back home because he got sick from the rain
the sky cleared up each day, but the lights in his eyes
dimmed  away day by day
I had never seen my grandfather
neither did my mother
he left no photo of him  at all

some sunny afternoon
my father put down his paintbrush
looking at the mountains in the distance, (as if) talking
to himself -
your grandpa was a very quiet person
on a sunny day like this, he would sit in the fields
and take a sunbath

one night
I was sitting in my car and the world
was disappearing in the pouring rain
where I saw my grandfather
carry his baggage and
walk in the rain

 

 


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Very good. Images clean and fusing well -中間小謝- 給 中間小謝 發送悄悄話 (47 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 10:40:26

Thank you xiao xie. -影雲- 給 影雲 發送悄悄話 影雲 的博客首頁 (28 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 10:50:14

感人至深,情義滿滿。dimed=dimmed -梧桐之丘- 給 梧桐之丘 發送悄悄話 梧桐之丘 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 12:20:59

Good catch. Thank you. -影雲- 給 影雲 發送悄悄話 影雲 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 12:31:16

小小筆誤而已。再讀一遍,寫得真好。 -梧桐之丘- 給 梧桐之丘 發送悄悄話 梧桐之丘 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 12:40:28

這個抓的太好了。要不意思相差十萬八千裏:)謝謝。 -影雲- 給 影雲 發送悄悄話 影雲 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 16:08:06

有散文詩的感覺,父愛滿滿 -浮雲馳- 給 浮雲馳 發送悄悄話 浮雲馳 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 14:35:21

謝謝浮雲。 -影雲- 給 影雲 發送悄悄話 影雲 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 16:07:19

棒外公。應該憑直覺動手畫一幅。:) -ling_yin_shi- 給 ling_yin_shi 發送悄悄話 ling_yin_shi 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 16:04:00

是爺爺。我外公的照片太多了。:) -影雲- 給 影雲 發送悄悄話 影雲 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 16:06:51

突然忘了問好。嘿,很久不見。新年好。 -影雲- 給 影雲 發送悄悄話 影雲 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 16:08:44

影雲兔年好。:) -ling_yin_shi- 給 ling_yin_shi 發送悄悄話 ling_yin_shi 的博客首頁 (30 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 17:04:20

Very touching. . . -小二哥李白- 給 小二哥李白 發送悄悄話 小二哥李白 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 18:28:33

謝謝閱讀與留言。 -影雲- 給 影雲 發送悄悄話 影雲 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/12/2023 postreply 12:50:26

this is outstanding poetic prose. salute to the author -leslieking- 給 leslieking 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 01/12/2023 postreply 07:42:00

Thank you for your encouraging comments. -影雲- 給 影雲 發送悄悄話 影雲 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/12/2023 postreply 12:50:54

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