Very nice, very articulate with all subtleties.

Sometimes it feels a bit strange when a non-native writes so articulately since a tint of "rawness" might be expected.

Na4 lan2 xing4 de2 (sorry, I don't have access to a Chinese keyboard at this moment), the Qing dynasty Manchurian poet, writes with this rawness/freshness, and his works are among my most favorites.

I can't decide which is better.

Either way, excellent work of yours.

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• 感謝中間小謝！如果我沒有理解錯誤的話，應該是說納蘭詞吧。我不是納蘭知音，個人認為馮至寫的淒婉白話詩更自然些。 -LYJiang- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/07/2023 postreply 15:47:20