Palindrome 不知所雲

Palindrome

A carriage picked me up in 1881
Its chauffeur didn't ask my destination
nor did he have navigation
He just steered the carriage towards 1:30 o'clock
constantly
as if that were the only guidance of our journey
We started at the street NOON
its sign translucent
I fell asleep because of my surroundings' silence
and counted the streets we passed in my dream
The chauffeur waked me up at an intersection
He pointed at a street sign barely visible on the lamp post
Sir, your stop, on time
NOON street at midnight in 2112

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Nunoftferreira - Good poetic exercise and nice piece of poetry you have crafted and shared with a very nice flow

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• 好詩，雲所不知。 -馮墟- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/24/2022 postreply 20:14:33

• 謝謝墟兄！留言妙極了！ -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/24/2022 postreply 20:19:39

• 夜半詩人。 -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/24/2022 postreply 21:15:18

• 又說，怎不譯中？ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/24/2022 postreply 21:16:02

• 夜半版主。 -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/24/2022 postreply 21:54:25

• 謝謝喵，夜半版主，我一會貼一個穀歌版 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 08:54:44

• 時間穿越啊 -浮雲馳- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 00:41:17

• 是啊，人性，不從曆史學，就會穿越，天朝是馬上就回到文革了 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 08:56:25

• 可惜曆史是螺旋上升，旋回去的過程很疼啊 -浮雲馳- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 12:52:09

• 看來需要背景知識才能懂。有Hotel California的感覺，或者是，Johny Depp的感覺。讚。 -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 00:58:14

• Johny Depp和老婆在我們這打官司。。。。。。。。。。。。。 -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 03:48:15

• 謝謝，為啥 johny depp? -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 08:56:50

• 從1990年剪刀手愛德華開始，Depp演了斷頭穀，理發師陶德，獨行俠，風格暗黑靈幻，此外 -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (178 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 17:17:04

• 靈兄是影視百科全書啊 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 19:40:47

• running back again:) -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 06:37:00

• 謝謝綠 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 08:57:08

• Noon,；1:30;midnight 2112.。。不知道拽到什麽地方去了，好玄。 -梧桐之丘- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 06:49:57

• 瞎轉彎 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 08:57:28

• It took 231 years to get there, the starting point :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 07:21:01

• 謝謝7，數學真好 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 08:57:42

• 想到了冰心94歲時寫的《我的家在哪裏》，說她做了一個夢，夢見坐“洋車”去中剪子巷，那裏是她靈魂深處的家。 -七斕- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 10:13:44

• 還真是 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/25/2022 postreply 19:41:31