《What's Your Language?》《什麽是你的語言?》

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《What's Your Language?》

love
answers a British girl 
counting the ravens on Tower Bridge

amor
shouts a Spanish boy
kicking a ball in a soccer field

amour
says a French woman 
sitting on the black iron bench under a sycamore tree

Liebe
whispers a German gentleman 
riding a white horse in a forest


speaks a Chinese lady 
walking on the Great Wall with a purple skirt

【備注】這首英文詩於10月7日發表在Allproetry,並在當天被選上了首頁。Allpoetry is the world's largest and best poetry site. 下麵是評分(Autorank)和部分評論(Comments):

Autorank Total 10 ( higher is reduced to 10 ), professional similarity 10 (of 10), concrete vs abstract 2 (of 2)

Likes: Ray Cope, Sand Singer, Jferry, Skyoak37, Treepower34, kaye, Rawena, Rowan Fox, Samara, LinaLNU, Poetryan, Ava L, Joy2B, Stiff Little Shrew, Adventurous, brendan law, Cexi Steph, Dark Migration

Poetryan - Grá  (love)
responds an Irish boy
reading a lovely poem in the comfort of a home

Jferry - Yes, there are several ways and languages in which to celebrate love. And we should celebrate that fact ... as this lovely poem does.

Stiff Little Shrew - Great idea. Perhaps all languages are languages of love after all.

P.S. The Tower of London is famous for it's ravens, below are the links about the ravens on Tower Bridge:

The Ravens at the Tower of London, England (historic-uk.com)

Ravens of the Tower of London - Wikipedia

中文版本

《什麽是你的語言?》


一個英國女孩回答
她在數塔橋上的烏鴉


一個西班牙男孩喊道
他在足球場踢球


一個法國女人說
她坐在梧桐樹下的黑色鐵椅上


一位德國紳士低語
他在森林裏騎著一匹白馬


一位中國女士說
她穿著紫色的裙子走在長城上




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構思巧妙,為啥除了中國都是歐洲國家?:) -塵凡無憂- 給 塵凡無憂 發送悄悄話 塵凡無憂 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 10/19/2022 postreply 08:36:15

謝謝憂憂點評。好問題,因為這幾種語言大家最熟悉,最有代表性 :) -CBA7- 給 CBA7 發送悄悄話 CBA7 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 10/19/2022 postreply 09:16:07

That Chinese lady must be CBA7 -nearby- 給 nearby 發送悄悄話 nearby 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 10/19/2022 postreply 09:17:45

She can be any Chinese lady. If you prefer me, no problem :) -CBA7- 給 CBA7 發送悄悄話 CBA7 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 10/19/2022 postreply 09:20:55

寫得好!像愛,媽媽,美這種詞匯,應該創造一種universal language來,全世界通用。 -番橋- 給 番橋 發送悄悄話 番橋 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 10/20/2022 postreply 06:50:30

謝謝番橋的感言和鼓勵。 -CBA7- 給 CBA7 發送悄悄話 CBA7 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 10/20/2022 postreply 07:04:09

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