Twin chimneys 留言出乎意料

Twin chimneys

Twin chimneys spike into the night sky
Rises from them
not smoke
but truth
burnt by the environmental doctrines

© 6 hours ago

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Likes: Orense, Dragos G

Dragos G - Damn this poem is brutal, the last line hit like a gut punch, haven't gotten such a powerful reaction from a poem as to physically move me in a long while

Great poem

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• 讚 -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 11:15:17

• 謝謝鄰兄 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 20:34:11

• 哈，這留言是挺出乎意料的。。。：） -塵凡無憂- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 12:04:18

• 是個teenager，激情滿出來了，哈哈哈 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 20:34:51

• 你這首寫的很好。結尾有驚訝。而且耐人尋味可多重理解。 -影雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 12:45:13

• 謝謝影雲 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 20:35:13

• 我知道我知道，是teenager。哈哈，我閃先，別打人。 -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 17:03:32

• 哈哈哈，你也像我，到處亂逛 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 20:35:46

• 您找Dragos G聊聊：） -西東人8- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 17:09:19

• 有代溝，哈哈哈 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 20:36:05

• Less is more -LittleEasy- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 17:37:05

• 謝謝 easy -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 20:36:20

• A very nice and sharp piece! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/05/2022 postreply 20:55:23

• 原來你是這個煙囪，他是那個。聖誕老人來你家的時候，爬哪個？？ -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/06/2022 postreply 06:59:25