Life

Life

Time is eating a rainbow cookie
The first bite
tiny
but sweet
The second bite
huge
but sour
Cookie implores
Time
please slow down
because I'm not eternal as you

© 8 hours ago

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Sea Glass - excellent metaphor :-)

3 hours ago   

 

Jawahar Gupta - sweet life
life goes on

8 hours ago  

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• 這個好翻，從Google，看裏麵。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。 -lovecat08- ♀ (303 bytes) () 08/20/2022 postreply 17:41:51

• 好詩！讚！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/20/2022 postreply 17:43:13

• 謝謝喵！你也太快了！ -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/20/2022 postreply 17:52:32

• 你別的詩難譯，這首兒童都會！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/20/2022 postreply 18:03:38

• 哈哈，是兒歌 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/20/2022 postreply 20:57:27

• 來，改為煮婦歌。Digested upon the death toll, in the form of flour -kirn- ♀ (31 bytes) () 08/21/2022 postreply 05:57:41

• 讚 -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/21/2022 postreply 06:04:03

• +100 -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/21/2022 postreply 07:49:38

• 莫名難過，可惜時間不會slow down -浮雲馳- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/21/2022 postreply 12:19:08

• Such sense of humor, especially the last 2 lines :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/22/2022 postreply 08:55:27