那天不是問你是不是這裏長大的,習慣用英語,另一個說不象

她說從標點符號能看出來,該斷的沒斷。我覺得你的英語作為non-native speaker已經很好了,很優美的,你不是問她怎麽能看出來區別,我想等她的回答學習一下的,可她又不答了,不介意的話,我可以舉兩個例子嗎?

比如:

1. Part of that routine is a dinner out for just the two of us leaving the kids behind at Grandparents'. (I think this is better: Part of that routine is a dinner out for just the two of us, leaving the kids...)


再比如, 用詞的順序,有小小別扭

2. To correctly set expectation, I would like to point out that people are generally laid back where we are. (No major mistake, just doesn't sound quite native. How about this: To set expectation correctly, I would like to point out that people in our area are generally laid back-->I guess that's what you meant, right?)

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修改的很好。 -newYearNewLife- 給 newYearNewLife 發送悄悄話 newYearNewLife 的博客首頁 (108 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 21:52:49

thank you! 其實沒有練過 -Gardenia_On_The_Bay- 給 Gardenia_On_The_Bay 發送悄悄話 Gardenia_On_The_Bay 的博客首頁 (40 bytes) () 08/28/2012 postreply 06:51:51

No, i don't mind at all. MM -Gardenia_On_The_Bay- 給 Gardenia_On_The_Bay 發送悄悄話 Gardenia_On_The_Bay 的博客首頁 (80 bytes) () 08/28/2012 postreply 06:48:50

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