不同意阿裏說的。詩寫得深沉才是發自內心。你的詩是不錯，但寫給純友誼可以，

打動不了你想真正追的人，因為你的詩像天上的雲，飄來飄去的~~忽悠的成分太多~

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• 站這兒~ :D -碧海藍天~- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2011 postreply 09:40:55

• xixi, sweet, when will we have a party for you? xixi~ -銀花花- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2011 postreply 09:46:50

• 你們串通好，來讓阿裏托啊？ -阿裏- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2011 postreply 09:49:04

• You have to have something to wear all the time. -銀花花- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2011 postreply 09:50:28

• what party? 娥真的是來圍觀的~ :D -碧海藍天~- ♀ (53 bytes) () 10/27/2011 postreply 09:55:22

• O_O 0_0 o_o ^_^ -_- ....... -銀花花- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2011 postreply 09:59:53

• 抱抱~ :D -碧海藍天~- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2011 postreply 10:03:47

• 問候藍天,抱抱~~:D -把酒話桑麻- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2011 postreply 10:04:57

• 抱抱~~:D -碧海藍天~- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2011 postreply 10:09:21

• 哈哈，hug樓上各位~~~~:D -把酒話桑麻- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2011 postreply 09:55:07

• PIA HIM, let him wear more and more. haha :-) -銀花花- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2011 postreply 09:56:57

• hahaha~~ -把酒話桑麻- ♀ (21 bytes) () 10/27/2011 postreply 10:02:53