試譯網友詩 - 《晨曉》原作：夢遊桃源

Dawning

 

The dawn is beaming 

Over that deep blue

Winter’s melting with that touch of spring

As that rainbow coats all creations below

Her tenderness caressing

A chime under that rim

Sweet and mellow the jingle

Echoes about to one and all

Waking the travelers

To get on where they long to go

 

The indolent souls

In a hazy world

Singing an Auld Lang Syne

To that cauldron of old

To savor for a lifetime

To forget not

The souls come alive

To the east rises the sun

All is here and all is as good

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• 您這個不是翻譯，而是再創作，跟原作比有另外一番意境，棒！ -馮墟- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/26/2023 postreply 19:57:25

• 謝謝欣賞和鼓勵！ -小溪之水- ♂ (306 bytes) () 02/26/2023 postreply 20:00:51

• 同意馮總的，這個是升華的再創作，很有意境。 -燕然山- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/27/2023 postreply 10:44:09

• 感謝感謝！靈感來自原作，必須致謝原作者。 -小溪之水- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/27/2023 postreply 13:02:17

• 見小溪教授在，請教你會怎麽翻譯這句中文==》 -三步兩橋- ♀ (488 bytes) () 02/27/2023 postreply 13:53:52

• 這個不難，有大歌星把它唱到了歌裏： -小溪之水- ♂ (314 bytes) () 02/27/2023 postreply 14:45:33

• 高手啊，你的翻譯是我至今見到的最好，最漂亮，最喜歡的。 -三步兩橋- ♀ (422 bytes) () 02/27/2023 postreply 15:39:58

• 謝謝！很高興你能喜歡。 -小溪之水- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/27/2023 postreply 17:08:38

• 好棒！以後難翻譯的就請小溪教授幫忙：） -燕然山- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/28/2023 postreply 00:33:28