醒來非常開心，我的詩歌得了一個金獎(網絡的contest)

Bamboo, or Something Else, That I Cannot Remember Now

 

September - time for us to depart
As the soft touch of autumn
Validates all the falling

You will stand next to a camellia
Out of sight
Out of days
    Of our life-drinking
    In the dark

It is early July.
The shovel of Time already in front of us
We look into each other
Into the vista
Of memory
That will, or may, be
Prolonged by Absence

 

 

 

 

Comments: 

 

Wonderfully classic with the bamboo, camellia and the last stanza's weighted nostalgia and silenced emptiness

 

The contest was hosted by allpoetry. 
 

所有跟帖： 

• 祝賀你，獎金是多少：） -未完的歌- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2022 postreply 08:20:26

• 不是金錢的，是Points的。:) -影雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2022 postreply 08:27:14

• 不要說獎金多少，說：多少錢？how much?:) -燕然山- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2022 postreply 13:13:57

• no money but tons of fun :) -影雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2022 postreply 13:23:22

• congratulations!! -鈴蘭聽風- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2022 postreply 17:35:01

• Thanks. -影雲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2022 postreply 18:14:41