風卷及掃均與全詩早春柔和意韻不合
逐鬢華之逐字也似不妥
東風早撰丹青譜,寫就人間錦繡篇 似太直白,有點老幹體味道而無餘韻。
風卷及掃均與全詩早春柔和意韻不合
逐鬢華之逐字也似不妥
東風早撰丹青譜,寫就人間錦繡篇 似太直白,有點老幹體味道而無餘韻。
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