前前後後也寫了不少近體詩詞,可以對自己要求高一點了。
"碎了一池白月光",依平水韻,是孤平360度無死角的三尺免冠正麵照。
所有跟帖:
• 謝謝惜也老師的批評,我有些懈怠了,這首是依通韻,我忘了標明,已經補上, -godog- ♂ (186 bytes) () 12/11/2024 postreply 05:45:06
• 謝謝惜也老師的批評,我有些懈怠了,這首是依通韻,我忘了標明,已經補上, -godog- ♂ (186 bytes) () 12/11/2024 postreply 05:45:06
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