【七律】久陰轉晴（第二版）

【七律】久陰轉晴

 

城南城北萬窗清，霽後蒼天必有情。

霧散群山山已現，雲凝多日日終明。

曾經雨雪陰幽困，複得時光波粒生。

每誦涼州詞未盡，還邀春夢度沙城。

 

第二版：

 

 

城南城北萬窗清，霽後蒼天必有情。

霧散群山山已現，雲凝多日日終明。

時光足跡辨猶濕，造化春芽覓已生。

每誦涼州詞未盡，還邀春夢度沙城。

 

Sunshine After A Long Stretch of Gloomy Days

 

Thousands of windows in the city turned bright,

through them came joy and delight.

Even the mood of the sky has changed.

When the day is fair, the sky does care.

 

The fog has dispersed.

The mountains have reappeared.

Many days of dense clouds, endless rain.

Finally, the sun rises again.

 

If you have been through snow, through rain,

through sunflower's petals being torn,

you would know that waves and particles

of time's light will be reborn.

 

Every time I recite the poem that asserts

the spring wind won't ever come to deserts,

I don't believe that's what it really means.

There's gonna be new things in Sun's new beams.

 

I'll still invite spring dreams to my sandy city,

for one thing, one thing only: to make it pretty.

 

(© January 22, 2024, godog)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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• 第三聯弱。 -惜也- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/22/2024 postreply 12:23:38

• 謝謝惜也老師點評，容我想想，看能不能換個更好的版本 -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/22/2024 postreply 12:33:09

• 加上了修改後的第二版 -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/22/2024 postreply 14:22:49

• 每誦涼州詞未盡，還邀春夢度沙城。餘味無窮，讚！ -方外居士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/22/2024 postreply 12:57:04

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• 哈哈，的確常常不準 -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/22/2024 postreply 14:23:24

• 每誦涼州詞未盡，還邀春夢度沙城。 -yongshi99- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/22/2024 postreply 16:42:27