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遙憶當初沒命追
九泉誇父淚雙垂
如今隔海離情苦
往日由天割愛悲
百世因緣還未了
千秋果報尚需為
心馳大野生詩雨
越過重洋洗腦宜

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• 謝謝詩友雅和，高興拙作能給你帶來靈感。最後一句作何解？ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/27/2023 postreply 15:59:52

• My special pleasure. I guess u lived in PRC for about 30 -吳之一- ♂ (129 bytes) () 11/27/2023 postreply 16:29:13

• Keeping one's heritage doesn't mean she is brain-washed, -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/27/2023 postreply 17:08:10

• just like I won't assume you were brain-washed. -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/27/2023 postreply 17:09:24

• One can only be brain-washed when she is still young and -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/27/2023 postreply 17:11:21

• brain still has open channels for washing fluid to come out -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/27/2023 postreply 17:13:03

• Well argued . I'm just kidding -吳之一- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/28/2023 postreply 04:12:37