用轉句做詩眼,第四句就要寫得低調一些。我個人習慣是詩眼在尾句。詩眼甚至可以是一個字,一個詞組的。
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• 但有門前顏色好,不妨開謝兩傾城。香魂斷與霜和雪,一口春風呡又生。 -惜也- ♀ (39 bytes) () 06/01/2023 postreply 14:18:19
• 但有門前顏色好,不妨開謝兩傾城。香魂斷與霜和雪,一口春風呡又生。 -惜也- ♀ (39 bytes) () 06/01/2023 postreply 14:18:19
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