七律 * 抒懷（附英譯）

《七律 • 抒懷》
作者  一葦北渡

慣經世上塵囂土，笑語悲聲悔遲悟。
曾喜天涯任放歌，那知江海多迷霧。
半生冷暖好圓融，百歲功名難建樹。
曆遍浮沉方會心，一身風雨一詩賦。

～～～順口溜英譯，供一笑～～～
‘The Truth of Life’ 
by Yi Wei Bei Du

Roaming through this mortal realm, I've journeyed far and wide.
Encountered both joy and pain, I'm still seeking life's elusive guide.

The thrill of boundless exploration is hard to keep,
And life's rugged terrain proves rough and steep.

I've learned to embrace the obstacles and hypocrisy on my way,
And realized that the glory is like the flutter of a butterfly's wings.

Through life's ebbs and flows, my heart has gained insight,
Finding beauty in every step, as if reading verses I write.

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• 仄韻有律詩一說嗎？我不懂瞎聊天。中英文都不錯 -作業本- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/29/2023 postreply 14:31:58

• “近體詩以平韻為正例，仄韻非常罕見。仄韻律詩很像古風。”——王力《漢語詩律學》 -一葦北渡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/30/2023 postreply 08:36:55

• 如果不合近體隻合古風，也不必勉強稱其為仄韻七律（絕）了。好的古體，一樣膾炙人口，又不受格式詬病。 -惜也- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/01/2023 postreply 05:53:17

• 笑語悲聲遲悔悟 -江南水彩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/03/2023 postreply 10:58:21