欣賞,問好山水兄! 拙見: 末句 稚孫相與同樂, 何如?
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• 謝武兄臨賞,問好!相與也曾考慮,但思過具參與味,小孩子非能飲酒吟詩,隻會依懷撒嬌胡鬧也。與吾則有違平仄,故倒裝之。:)見笑! -山水蒼茫- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/31/2021 postreply 08:20:03
• 謝武兄臨賞,問好!相與也曾考慮,但思過具參與味,小孩子非能飲酒吟詩,隻會依懷撒嬌胡鬧也。與吾則有違平仄,故倒裝之。:)見笑! -山水蒼茫- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/31/2021 postreply 08:20:03
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