心跡若搖梭, 果然空自多。 本來描現狀, 終究見淆訛。
~~本來是描述詩壇現狀, 您若不喜歡那些, 美安可刪掉。~~
~~本來是描述詩壇現狀, 您若不喜歡那些, 美安可刪掉。~~
• 這首呢,把徒然自作情改成"果然空自多"就會順暢很多,不過整首就要換成五多韻。 -墨瑞- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/17/2020 postreply 10:41:28
• 心跡若搖梭, 果然空自多。 本來描現狀, 終究見淆訛。 -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/17/2020 postreply 11:29:22
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