印象

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印象

 

如一束光

抑或是一個夢

輕輕飄進我的冥想

 

當一陣夏日炎風

止於一懷脫塵的澈冽

靜謐的時空裏

你我傾心相悅

 

願為卿

穿越天荒

萬年啊

可慢可長

 

你隻心若止水

望去

一眸疏淡明暢

 

落落的是清塵

戀戀的容光

時而幽澀

時而激揚

 

。。。

。。。

 

Lily Impression

Such as a beam of light
Or a dream
Gently drifting into my meditation

a hot summer day
Stop at beyond life
the air is crisply cold
Quiet time and space
We smile at each other

Willing to be you
Travel through time
Thousands of years passed
Can be slow or long

Stay still like a pond of water
When I look deep into you
Your eyes are so desireless and glowing happily

Like clear fairy dust falling into my life
Such unforgettable moments
Sometimes silently sob
Sometimes fly with the wind

。。。

。。。

impression ( old version)

 

Such as a beam of light

Or a dream

Gently drifting into my meditation

 

a gust of wind

Stop at beyond life

the air is crisply cold

Quiet time and space

We smile at each other

 

Willing to be you

Travel through wild spaces and time

Thousands of years passed

Can be slow or long

 

Stay still like a pond of water

When I look deep into you

Your eyes are so desireless and glowing happily

 

Like clear dust falling into my life

Such unforgettable moments

Sometimes silently sob

Sometimes fly with the wind

 

。。。

。。。

:)))

:)))

 

 

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流殤好像和英文版裏的time 含義有別,不match 。而且“穿越流觴”費解。 -道不遠- 給 道不遠 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 08/29/2019 postreply 08:08:34

感謝道遠詩長臨帖提寶貴意見。 改做穿越天荒~~~~~~~ -阿童木牧- 給 阿童木牧 發送悄悄話 阿童木牧 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/29/2019 postreply 10:57:58

一如既往的神奇美好 -北回歸線的陽光- 給 北回歸線的陽光 發送悄悄話 北回歸線的陽光 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/29/2019 postreply 18:04:50

好詩 -千山我獨行- 給 千山我獨行 發送悄悄話 千山我獨行 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/29/2019 postreply 18:55:38

你隻心若止水 望去 一眸疏淡明暢。美! -斯人曰- 給 斯人曰 發送悄悄話 斯人曰 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/29/2019 postreply 19:16:51

感謝北詩人,千版和斯人姐雅臨謬讚! 問好! -阿童木牧- 給 阿童木牧 發送悄悄話 阿童木牧 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/29/2019 postreply 22:55:39

好詩 ! -Meander001- 給 Meander001 發送悄悄話 Meander001 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/30/2019 postreply 04:17:37

讚!這印象,穿越萬年,可慢可長... 欣賞! -閑者__- 給 閑者__ 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 08/30/2019 postreply 21:22:36

我想,她跟這一池碧蓮的距離,是永遠的,因為現實的美,是不太可能於夢幻之中造就的。 -秦照- 給 秦照 發送悄悄話 秦照 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/31/2019 postreply 08:36:08

這個,美得迷銀哈~~~ 喜歡!問好阿童! HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUG!~~~~ -遍野- 給 遍野 發送悄悄話 遍野 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/31/2019 postreply 11:12:49

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