【七律】球場青蓮 (用韻 清泉水兄)
By Meander
一鑒方塘荷淡然, 球兒入水逗青蓮。
熟男何怨出身地, 生客沉沙果嶺邊。
心境善和緣好事, 道場光範困如眠。
於雷聲處撐孤傘, 翠色日[1]時縱火煙。
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[1] 翠色日~ Treason Day, 4th of July. Why is 4th of July called treason day?
【七律】球場青蓮 (用韻 清泉水兄)
By Meander
一鑒方塘荷淡然, 球兒入水逗青蓮。
熟男何怨出身地, 生客沉沙果嶺邊。
心境善和緣好事, 道場光範困如眠。
於雷聲處撐孤傘, 翠色日[1]時縱火煙。
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[1] 翠色日~ Treason Day, 4th of July. Why is 4th of July called treason day?
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美詩美圖!好久不見,問好001兄!
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07/10/2019 postreply
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最後一句音韻有點拗
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07/10/2019 postreply
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心境善和緣好事, 道場光範困如眠。讚!
-天朝玉-
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07/28/2019 postreply
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