秋煙望斷過黃昏,夢魘彤雲冷月痕。
空際一聲烏鵲噪,不須思量已銷魂。
秋煙望斷過黃昏,夢魘彤雲冷月痕。
空際一聲烏鵲噪,不須思量已銷魂。
• 多謝閑雲詩友寶貴建議。因為第一句秋煙望斷,所以第二句應為目之所見。第三句想表達淒然而驚的意思,空際有些像了。還需再琢磨琢磨。多謝 -偏愛打油不沽酒- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/12/2018 postreply 10:48:12
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