謝謝清泉君指出。我也覺得第三句與全詩有點不協調。容我想想改正。
所有跟帖:
• 改為:“金風燥氣來相虐,火味吹過紐約城“。也點明季節,可能要好些。 -十乘- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/13/2018 postreply 15:16:39
• 改為:“金風燥氣來相虐,火味吹過紐約城“。也點明季節,可能要好些。 -十乘- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/13/2018 postreply 15:16:39
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