Shadow

Shadow

 

I stand up on a meadow at sunrise,

gaze at morning dew in my shadow. 

Within each dew drop I search for moonshine,

that I see every night in your eyes.

I feel your contour curving on the meadow,

and your warmth on my palm from your face. 

Why do you leave me alone with my long long shadow,

let the sun dry and evaporate your last trace? 

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• 很押韻。 -海洋藍- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/29/2018 postreply 13:55:37

• 謝謝鼓勵！ 求您以後別說現代詩押韻呀的好， 俺會覺得詩不好， 所以隻好說韻好 ：-） -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/29/2018 postreply 16:03:37

• Why do you leave me alone with my long long shadow。 喜歡這句。 -海洋藍- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/30/2018 postreply 05:15:42

• 謝謝藍！ 俺開玩笑的 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/30/2018 postreply 06:55:11

• 好看！很深情婉約！ -千山我獨行- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/29/2018 postreply 20:51:46