幾年前第一次學翻譯，試用《滿江紅》：The Road Not Taken by R. Frost被告知需要用平仄

The Road Not Taken 

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BY ROBERT FROST

Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,

And sorry I could not travel both

And be one traveler, long I stood

And looked down one as far as I could

To where it bent in the undergrowth;

 

Then took the other, as just as fair,

And having perhaps the better claim,

Because it was grassy and wanted wear;

Though as for that the passing there

Had worn them really about the same,

 

And both that morning equally lay

In leaves no step had trodden black.

Oh, I kept the first for another day!

Yet knowing how way leads on to way,

I doubted if I should ever come back.

 

I shall be telling this with a sigh

Somewhere ages and ages hence:

Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—

I took the one less traveled by,

And that has made all the difference.

 

秋染葉黃，林深處，兩路茫茫。佇立久，抬眼遠望，取舍難抉。

 

 寂寂青山藏幽徑，悠悠長路伴我行。人蹤滅，荒草萋萋間，孤影孓。  

 

晨光曙，葉滿地，路未印，歸來否？ 擇一路，更添如畫美景絕！

 

少年壯誌也輕狂，老夫憶顧來時路。 夕陽晚，青山相對伴，終不悔。

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• 您怎麽回的？Frost的滿江紅不講平仄？ -笑問- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/17/2018 postreply 20:04:38

• 就是，都怪frost。他應該注明， -碼頭工- ♀ (348 bytes) () 04/17/2018 postreply 20:12:06