TOUCH BY TOUCH(學寫）

touch by touch

when the wind starts flow
it starts kiss my lip
when the rain starts drop
it stars wet my hair
when the words starts dance
it pumps my soft heart
when  the music starts play
it lifts my deep soul
when the feelings get touch
it touchs my little dream
when the touching goes hot
it blows my mind up

touch by touch
when our words starts spining
touch by touch
when our heart starts opening
touch by touch
when we meet each other
touch by touch
when we fall in love

歡迎糾正錯別字，沒查字典。：）

 

 

 

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• 好詩，有鮑伯帝倫的風格。學讚！ -潛東籬- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/16/2018 postreply 08:49:37

• 謝謝雅讚！：） -安妮的小屋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/16/2018 postreply 12:51:23

• 厲害，會寫英文詩 -看海闊天空- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/16/2018 postreply 17:12:50

• 第一首，學習中。。你也快來寫吧，等你的詩。。：） -安妮的小屋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/16/2018 postreply 18:32:01