結尾需要一點出其不意是不是更好些? 個見。問好!
兩種不同的方式 應該都可以吧。個人認為如果是第二個版本,
所有跟帖:
• 多謝石班好建議,我把結尾改了,請看《雲霞》2。新周愉快!~ -天朝玉- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/12/2018 postreply 05:04:17
• 多謝石班好建議,我把結尾改了,請看《雲霞》2。新周愉快!~ -天朝玉- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/12/2018 postreply 05:04:17
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