“行”出韻啦!對仗也有問題:) )
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• 荷花清香明眼,是出韻了,對仗倒問題不大,幫忙想想,用什麽字好,可能還是不改好。 -luck86- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/20/2018 postreply 17:01:02
• 不改應該是上上策。:) ) -荷花清香- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/20/2018 postreply 18:51:11
• 荷花清香明眼,是出韻了,對仗倒問題不大,幫忙想想,用什麽字好,可能還是不改好。 -luck86- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/20/2018 postreply 17:01:02
• 不改應該是上上策。:) ) -荷花清香- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/20/2018 postreply 18:51:11
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