七絕 無題
時光荏苒逝不回,對鏡方知添皺紋。 日轉星移又一歲,惟有豪情似韶華。
七絕 無題
時光荏苒逝不回,對鏡方知添皺紋。 日轉星移又一歲,惟有豪情似韶華。
• 韻? -清泉水- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/08/2018 postreply 12:09:17
• 初學者,不通格律平仄,多謝指點。 -Upchina- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/08/2018 postreply 13:19:27
• 荏苒時光逝不回,鏡中雙鬢漸如灰。星移鬥轉心猶壯,依舊豪情日日來~~~ -無負清歡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/08/2018 postreply 19:34:35
• many thanks! -Upchina- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/08/2018 postreply 23:01:24
• 問好新朋友! -石蝶- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/08/2018 postreply 20:51:37
• thanks a lot! -Upchina- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/08/2018 postreply 22:58:21
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