飄零何日止,落葉願歸根。
化作肥泥土,滋生草木深。
• 好絕!第二句已有“歸根”,三四句似有複遝感,若能起點興歸到自我則意韻更為靈動。 -清泉水- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/13/2017 postreply 17:20:34
• 謝謝 -樂天陶陶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2017 postreply 08:09:15
• 欣賞! -Willie_USA- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2017 postreply 08:27:55
• 欣賞!問好樂兄! -荷花清香- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2017 postreply 16:06:13
• 問候! -白九- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2017 postreply 19:13:40
• 感謝諸位臨帖支持 -樂天陶陶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2017 postreply 15:45:27
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