流善水 - 流字不太順。
五十弦對尋常月 - 不太切,特別是尋常月。尋常無論作數量和形容詞修飾月都不太貼切。
流善水 - 流字不太順。
五十弦對尋常月 - 不太切,特別是尋常月。尋常無論作數量和形容詞修飾月都不太貼切。
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