英譯杜子美《望嶽》

 

望嶽

岱宗夫如何，
齊魯青未了。
造化鍾神秀，
陰陽割昏曉。
蕩胸生層雲，
決眥入歸鳥。
會當淩絕頂，
一覽眾山小。

Gazing Mount Tai

Lord of mountains, how, should you be comprehended! 
Realms Qi and Lu cannot limit your greenness extended
Creation entrusts her marvels and grace in you
Dividing morn and dusk your ridge runs through
Ever-growing clouds refresh  my imagination
Returning birds homed in you stretch my vision
I shall claim your ultimate top with a view for all
The mighty others below reduced to small

 

 

所有跟帖： 

• 挺不錯的。可以在語氣上加把勁兒。 -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/01/2017 postreply 08:50:15

• 謝謝。可否說具體些？ -中間小謝- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/01/2017 postreply 09:12:35

• 把句子砍短，會不會好些？ -中間小謝- ♂ (423 bytes) () 08/01/2017 postreply 12:24:25

• 好像有點太短？ -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/01/2017 postreply 21:06:47