七言: 討論寫好律詩戲作 + 英譯 + 粵語歌

 

為寫好律憶前朝，萬慮千思到深宵。

早有帥哥敵公瑾，未見佳人賽小喬。

 

In order to write good poems of eight lines,

We do our best to think hard till midnight.

Joey has been defeated by talented handsome guys,
But we haven't seen anyone surpass his wife.  

少女
慈禧 https://wesingapp.com/play?s=Hw36Ui5HGuC_W5ME&lang=en 
 

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• 未見帥哥敵公瑾，早有佳人賽小喬。 -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/07/2017 postreply 08:13:39

• 寫錯了字，修正了。多謝一畝詩人留言～～～～ -小貝殼weed- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/07/2017 postreply 10:48:28