琴聲老巷中,似乎不是眼前景色,而是後來見聞。
詩中出現夕陽和斜照,有重複之嫌。40字五律,一字千金!
琴聲老巷中,似乎不是眼前景色,而是後來見聞。
詩中出現夕陽和斜照,有重複之嫌。40字五律,一字千金!
• 多謝春風兄點評指教,下筆隨心,確實要多學壇裏詩友勤於推敲之處 -無負清歡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/17/2017 postreply 15:15:56
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