“揮”字動感甚強,不知是指人影帶起的餘香,還是花隨風動?
忽覺少許改動或許又有另一翻意境:“餘香伴淡緋。”冒昧了。
“揮”字動感甚強,不知是指人影帶起的餘香,還是花隨風動?
忽覺少許改動或許又有另一翻意境:“餘香伴淡緋。”冒昧了。
• 多謝老哈哈兄建議,這個韻腳字不算多,試了好多句,緋想過,最後還是覺得。。。 -Willie_USA- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/01/2017 postreply 17:43:19
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