寫得像口號。不像近體詩詞。

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• 深謝並同意墨瑞老師的invaluable comment。 我自己感覺又像廣告語言, 也不滿意。我will re-write l -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/24/2017 postreply 04:52:21

• 我will re-write later on. Thanks and welcome such a comment! -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/24/2017 postreply 04:53:04