【七絕】於春去處有雷鳴

【七絕】於春去處有雷鳴

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  於春去處有雷鳴[1],   (平平仄仄仄平平)

  向晚尋時聽野曲。 (仄仄平平平仄仄)

  寂謐山林一洞天,   (仄仄平平仄仄平)

  茵茵果嶺三枚玉。 (平平仄仄平平仄)

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[1]. 雷鳴 ~ 指第一號木擊球響聲。

 

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• 讚賞好詩! -前世無理- ♂ (52 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 03:45:43

• +1 草上球，水中月？天上月？西沉日？外加Meander的眸子？ -Willie_USA- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 05:33:34

• Yes, 玉~球 (back now)! -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 05:40:35

• Haha,why 3? -Willie_USA- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 05:45:51

• Oooh, Threesome playing, 3 people, (1 ball one person). -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 08:14:26

• See,why not 2 balls for each one? -Willie_USA- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 08:31:18

• That is governed by golf rules. -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 09:15:11

• Every flight/group allows maximum 4 people playing, but -Meander001- ♂ (70 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 09:26:39

• threesome, twosome, or single is OK depending on availability. -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 09:29:02

• Thanks,bro. -Willie_USA- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 10:11:51

• ~~深謝 Willie 兄雅臨垂賞！ -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:52:23

• ~@@ 深謝前世無理兄雅臨和鼓勵! -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:32:36

• 正格對仗好! -歲寒鬆柏- ♂ (97 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 04:44:37

• 深謝歲寒兄垂賞鼓勵！ -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:41:52

• 最後一句似乎意猶未盡～ -momo_sharon- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 06:58:29

• 深謝momo 君, 容我再想想。 -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:50:23

• 001兄好詩，三枚玉！好聯想。 -Once-always- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 08:06:30

• 深謝Once MM 垂賞鼓勵！ -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:42:51

• 三枚玉！！欣賞M兄美詩！ -荷花清香- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 12:02:44

• 深謝沁文 荷花君謬讚鼓勵! -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:41:04

• 光打雷不下雨，繼續玩玉：） -哈瑞- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 12:19:25

• 謝謝哈雷兄雅臨, 哈哈, 有哈雷當然打雷了! 問好兄! -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:46:54

• 欣賞 -closeby- ♂ (80 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 14:11:38

• +1 -樂者- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 16:40:22

• 謝 樂者兄雅臨和鼓勵! -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:31:18

• 謝謝近兄雅臨。"雷鳴" 指擊球的響聲。第一號木擊球聲也夠大的。這裏雷鳴聲當然有誇張了。 -Meander001- ♂ (144 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:29:36

• 野曲指球場的鳥鳴鹿鳴。祝周末愉快! -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 18:08:42

• 謝、讚 美安兄 妙和 。。。揮灑愜意莫如君 。。。春安、周末愉快。 -沁文----古來客- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:18:20

• 深謝沁文兄垂賞鼓勵！周末愉快! -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2017 postreply 17:44:25