謝謝和接受作業兄點評建議: 第三句已改成 "驅車停愛春妝淺". 希望把思路切換到 emotional respects.
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謝謝和接受作業兄點評建議: 第三句已改成 "驅車停愛春妝淺". 希望把思路切換到 emotional respects.
Could you please take a look and comment if have any suggestions. Thanks!
• 覺得改得大好,已點出停,於是讀者便期待停後所發生的事情,此處引入遇大雁便順其自然了!!! -作業本- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/02/2017 postreply 14:35:58