謝謝和接受作業兄點評建議: 第三句已改成 "驅車停愛春妝淺". 希望把思路切換到 emotional respects.
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謝謝和接受作業兄點評建議: 第三句已改成 "驅車停愛春妝淺". 希望把思路切換到 emotional respects.
本帖於 2017-04-02 12:26:25 時間, 由普通用戶 Meander001 編輯
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覺得改得大好，已點出停，於是讀者便期待停後所發生的事情，此處引入遇大雁便順其自然了！！！
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