M兄此絕若添成律當更佳。絕句之結尾有話講完,意未盡之效為佳。愚見勿計。
所有跟帖:
• 同意 作業兄's comment 。我再想想, 以前有一次化絕為律成功的例子。 -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/30/2017 postreply 13:30:15
• +1 讚 -Willie_USA- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/30/2017 postreply 16:05:07
• 同意 作業兄's comment 。我再想想, 以前有一次化絕為律成功的例子。 -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/30/2017 postreply 13:30:15
• +1 讚 -Willie_USA- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/30/2017 postreply 16:05:07
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