題材很好,再發揮調整一下,應該是一首很不錯的詩。這裏厲害的老師很多,他們很熱心。個見,諒。
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• 謝謝!歡迎修改指正! -樂者- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/16/2017 postreply 09:10:28
• 謝謝!歡迎修改指正! -樂者- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/16/2017 postreply 09:10:28
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