西風昨夜漫天起,好句,結句”傷心滿地痕”似可再酌,個見,問好詩詞兄。
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• +1! -清泉水- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/12/2017 postreply 12:49:53
• 謝相看和清泉老師。這裏傷心是指被大風吹落下來的花蕾和花枝。滿地都是, 看了很傷心。 -我要學詩詞- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/12/2017 postreply 13:57:18
• +1! -清泉水- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/12/2017 postreply 12:49:53
• 謝相看和清泉老師。這裏傷心是指被大風吹落下來的花蕾和花枝。滿地都是, 看了很傷心。 -我要學詩詞- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/12/2017 postreply 13:57:18
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