後四句,改成這樣如何:
曲水輕輕環小苑,東風脈脈卷珠簾。
可憐紙上與君約,怎料青絲白露淹。(與,半拗,可救可不救)
或
可憐紙上與君約,怎料鬢絲新露添。(對句拗救,新,一救二,與,鬢)
後四句,改成這樣如何:
曲水輕輕環小苑,東風脈脈卷珠簾。
可憐紙上與君約,怎料青絲白露淹。(與,半拗,可救可不救)
或
可憐紙上與君約,怎料鬢絲新露添。(對句拗救,新,一救二,與,鬢)
• 好主意!!多謝相看兄!! -荷花清香- ♀ (244 bytes) () 03/07/2017 postreply 03:50:44
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