七絕三首 - 試譯One Day - by Christina Georgina Rossetti

一

那日初逢晴碧春

枝寒橡樹未芽痕

報春花綻苔草綠

鳥語呢喃獻頌文

 

二

那日別離落葉秋

斜陽依舊窺不休

魂隨往事歸何處

心碎離愁付水流

 

三

何日重逢未有期

天堂恐是苦情息

天使欲詢前生故

全說無悔有相依

 

很欣賞顫音老師的譯作，所以讀了一點Christina Georgina Rossetti的作品，想嚐試一下不同的風格，請各位詩長指正。

 

One Day - Poem by Christina Georgina Rossetti

 

I will tell you when they met:

In the limpid days of Spring;

Elder boughs were budding yet,

Oaken boughs looked wintry still,

But primrose and veined violet

In the mossful turf were set,

While meeting birds made haste to sing

And build with right good will.

 

I will tell you when they parted:

When plenteous Autumn sheaves were brown,

Then they parted heavy-hearted;

The full rejoicing sun looked down

As grand as in the days before;

Only they had lost a crown;

Only to them those days of yore

Could come back nevermore.

 

When shall they meet? I cannot tell,

Indeed, when they shall meet again,

Except some day in Paradise:

For this they wait, one waits in pain.

Beyond the sea of death love lies

For ever, yesterday, to-day;

Angels shall ask them, 'Is it well?'

And they shall answer, 'Yea.'

 

 

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• 大讚譯者大作！ -北極湖- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/03/2017 postreply 07:29:30

• 謝謝北極湖老師誇獎！ -幸福生- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/03/2017 postreply 08:18:51

• 感覺譯文比原詩好。 -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/03/2017 postreply 08:37:11

• 不敢當，謝謝Meander001詩長誇獎，和原詩風格不同，隻是嚐試。 -幸福生- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/03/2017 postreply 08:47:31

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• 學習老師大作, 讚 -我要學詩詞- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/03/2017 postreply 12:18:43

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